Sequence #2 and Story Board

During today's lesson we came up with a second possible sequence of shots that we can try out

1. Camera slowly zooms in from an empty eerie hallway with a door at the end of the hall
2. Continue to zoom through the peephole of the door where we see a woman sitting at her desk
3. Camera pans the room to her desk where we see her wall full off cut out faces and magazine pages
4. Point of view shot of woman working. Audience sees her wrinkly/old hands cutting pieces out from magazines. Things on her desk include : tape, scissors, magazines, sewing tools
5. Woman gets up to leave(camera still in point of view) to the bathroom
6. She stops in front of the mirror and her face and identity is revealed to the audience for the first time as an old lady
7. Shot cuts to the back of her head while looking at the mirror, showing a few grey hair and skin of her back
8. Close up of woman pulling a strand of grey hair and it landing in the sink
9. Woman walks out of the toilet and camera zooms out to wide shot of her room gradually
10. A body/leg can be seen hanging out of the bathtub with blood dripping

We also drew out a story board according to this but unfortunately were were only able to draw out half of the shots.

Final Story board:

Talk through: